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Post by youthofoz on Oct 7, 2012 0:24:58 GMT -5
The TARDIS arrives in the rural community of Little Balcomb on Christmas Eve and it is not the only new arrival in town. An inexplicable snowstorm has cut the village off from the outside world and there are sightings of the Devil himself stalking through the countryside...
Could this have anything to do with the recent advance from a property development cartel no one has heard of? Or perhaps the amateur archaeologist Ben Chatham is more involved than he claims to be? But as a spate of deaths and murders stride Little Balcomb, Rose finds herself caught in a forgotten war from another galaxy.
Right now, Rose needs the Doctor more than ever.
But she lost the Doctor long ago...
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Post by sparacus on Oct 7, 2012 15:57:12 GMT -5
That box design is excellent!
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Post by youthofoz on Oct 7, 2012 16:29:49 GMT -5
Thank you.
Pity about the spelling mistakes, but...
Oh, BTW, spara, do you want to write an author's introduction or something?
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Post by sparacus on Oct 7, 2012 16:32:15 GMT -5
Thank you. Pity about the spelling mistakes, but... Oh, BTW, spara, do you want to write an author's introduction or something? I like that idea.
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Post by youthofoz on Oct 7, 2012 16:49:47 GMT -5
...well. Are you going to do it or not?
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Post by sparacus on Oct 7, 2012 17:17:52 GMT -5
...well. Are you going to do it or not? I'll do it. let me know whatyou require
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Post by youthofoz on Oct 8, 2012 0:27:16 GMT -5
Well, I require something as lengthy, passionate, erudite, witty and entertaining as this introduction.
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Post by youthofoz on Oct 8, 2012 0:36:03 GMT -5
Or maybe
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Post by sparacus on Oct 10, 2012 16:29:49 GMT -5
I'd appreciate it if you could remind me of the story that I am introducing as it is missing from my archive.
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Post by youthofoz on Oct 10, 2012 17:02:00 GMT -5
The first one you wrote. The first one with Ben Chatham. The one you came up with to be better than The Christmas Invasion. The very first time all this started.
...sheesh.
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Post by youthofoz on Oct 10, 2012 17:22:48 GMT -5
The wikipage summary for your proposed synopsis.
Basically it was "The Daemons" with Ben Chatham in it. When the REAL "Christmas Invasion" came out, you were notably unable to come up with any socio-political subtexts, morals or character development in your effort. The aliens killed people for no reason, there was nothing to do with Christmas, the new Doctor was completely ignored and sidelined, and there were no notable characters.
All things I'm trying to remedy - three chapters finished, folks!
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Post by mandii on Oct 10, 2012 23:56:39 GMT -5
"My version of The Christmas Invasion" by sparacus
OK - I've no doubt that if I posted a thread about how I think the Christmas special will be lightweight etc people would shout 'but you haven't seen it yet' etc. Theres a grain of truth there so I'm not going to - rather I'm going to 'put up' my own idea of what 'The Christmas Invasion' should be like & then people can judge for themselves whether RTD's vision & mine have anything in common.
"The Christmas Invasion"
The newly regenerated Doctor lands the TARDIS in the village of, er, Little Balcomb on Christmas Eve 2005. Rose & the Doctor emerge to a snow covered country scene - like on a Christmas card - a robin pecking at the old farm gate and the snow-capped church steeple in the distance. They run off through the snow like a pair of kids - but something is wrong. In the snow they see strange footprints - big huge things live cloven hooves. The Doctor mumbles something about the Devil walking the earth & Rose looks scared.
Later in the village, the Doctor & Rose are chatting to Mrs Smythesby-Jones (played by Patricia Routledge) in the village shop. Strange figures have been seen at night tramping through the snow and the villagers are also worried by rumours that the fields aroung the village are about to be compulsorally purchased by the government for housing development. The leader of the villagers' protest group against this - Reg Prentice - was found murdered with a pitchfork through him near the church door last weekand cabbalistic drawings carved in blood on the church door.
The Doctor & Rose are worried.
Later that night the vicar is getting the church ready for the Christmas Eve mass when he hears footsteps behind him. He screams as a hairy hand clasps his throat and tears it out!!!!!!
Rose hears the scream and runs to the scene & finds the mutilated corpse. Also on the scene is young Ben Chatham (played by Adam Rickitt) a young archaeologist fresh from university and here to investigate the archaeological history of the village. He tears off his shirt and covers the corpse with it - his smoothe, muscular chest shining in the candlelight, luscious & luminous.
The Doctor believes he knows the answer. The development plan is a ruse to secure the village for the 'Radon Development Company' a cover for an alien race called the Lucifarians who physically resemble the medieval image of the Devil. Under the church lies the spaceship of their ancient leader who crashed here hundreds of years ago. Rose, the Doctor & Ben confront the aliens in the church and defeat them by destroying the spaceship by setting off a self-destruct device in it via sophisticated communications technology in the TARDIS>
Christmas Eve is saved and Ben joins the TARDIS crew for the next adventures.
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Post by youthofoz on Oct 11, 2012 1:41:08 GMT -5
Um. Thanks for that.
I was sure there was more to it than that - the script has much more incident. But it's still as thematically barren and uninvolving as I remember...
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Post by youthofoz on Oct 11, 2012 3:54:05 GMT -5
And for my next trick I turn
into
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Post by sparacus on Oct 11, 2012 17:57:50 GMT -5
This has refreshed mymemory a bit.mI'll bung together an intro when I'm sober.
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